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2018 MCAS
Grade 6 English Language Arts
Question 24

Idea Development - Score Point 0

There are indications that the student may have read the passage and/or the poem, but the brief response incorrectly interprets the speaker's reference to astronauts as wishing to go into space with help from her grandfather. The response does not address the question of how Rinko and the speaker feel about their heritage.

Standard English Conventions - Score Point 0

The response consists of four lines of text that contain numerous errors, including errors in capitalization and end punctuation. The response demonstrates no control of Standard English conventions for grammar, usage, and mechanics at this grade level.
Answer for Idea Development Score Point 0, and Standard English Conventions Score Point 0
wen rinko was going to space she had a flash back becase wen she was akid she wanted go to space her grandfather help her

drems come true the she went to space and her grandfather did pomes aboute her



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